مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : :: خلك قدها وإدخل صححهـآ :: مُتعهـ وإستفـآده ::
GENTLe MAN
25-08-2007, 12:16 PM
السَلام عَليكُم 
 
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 [ LaD!eS / GeNTLe MeN ] .. !
 
It !s A Game 
 
In Th!s Game I wanna Every one Try 2 Be A Corrector
 
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نرجع للحظه للعربيه [ BREAK ] .. خخ
 
اللعبه سهله أرجو من الجميع التفـآعل [ منها نستفيد 
 
ومنها نستمتع ] ..!
 
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فقط انا رآح أقوم بوضع :: جمله إنجليزيه فيها خطء مُتعمد ::
 
وإلي يجي بعدي يورينا شطارته ويحاول يكتشف الخطء
 
ويصلح الجمله وبعدها هو بدوره يضع جمله للي بعده يوجد بها أغلاط ..!
 
أو ممكن يعمل تمويه [ ويخلي جمله صحيحه
 
والذكي الي بعده يجي ويقول أنه الجمله ما فيها أغلاط ] ..!
 
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أتمنى إنها وضحت
 
وانا راح أبتدي بشيء بسيط إن شاء الله
 
( I Like She But She Don't Like Me ) يلا إكتشف الأغلاط 2
 
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نظرعيني
25-08-2007, 12:39 PM
I Like She But She Don't Like Me 
I like her but she dosent like me
He is good man but him sister are bad
GENTLe MAN
25-08-2007, 01:09 PM
That'S Correct 
 
 
He is good man but him sister are bad
 
( He Is a Good Man But His Sister Is Bad ) .. !
 
][3][ Mistakes ][
 
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][ She walk under the sun every day ][
نظرعيني
25-08-2007, 10:50 PM
Correct
 She walk under the sun every day 
.She walks under the sun every day
نظرعيني
25-08-2007, 10:55 PM
sami is adoctor .he have black hair
4
 Mistakes
GENTLe MAN
26-08-2007, 12:50 AM
Correct
 
sami is adoctor .he have black hair
 
 
.sami is a doctor , he has black hair
 
 
][ Would you mind drink some tea ][ 
 
( Mistakes 2 )
حوراء الحصن
26-08-2007, 09:16 AM
][ Would you mind drink some tea 
correct
جملتي هي:Has your course started already?
1mistake
GENTLe MAN
27-08-2007, 01:13 AM
][ Would you mind drink some tea 
 
 
correct
 
 
 
 
!..[ sorry ..  [ It is not correct
 
The correct answer is
 
(  ?..Would you mind drinking some tea )
 
 
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GENTLe MAN
27-08-2007, 01:24 AM
Has your course started already?
1mistake
 
 
 
I thinK the answer is 
 
(  ? .. Has your course already started  )
 
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mine sentence 
 
][ ?.. Could you tell me when is the next bus leave  ][
 
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حوراء الحصن
28-08-2007, 11:05 AM
( ? .. Has your course already started )
The correct sentence:
Has your course started yet?
no already
:) 
?.. Could you tell me when the bus next leave
correct?:)
حوراء الحصن
28-08-2007, 11:49 AM
جملتي هي:he has been at his computer since six hours
1mistake
GENTLe MAN
28-08-2007, 01:21 PM
( ? .. Has your course already started )
The correct sentence:
Has your course started yet?
no already
:) 
 
Yeah .. uR The teaCheR
?.. Could you tell me when the bus next leave
correct?:)
 
:: Well .. It Is 
 
?.. Could you tell me when the next bus leaves
 
 
 
 
he has been at his computer since six hours
 
. he has been at his computer for six hours
 
I hope that's Correct
 
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GENTLe MAN
28-08-2007, 01:30 PM
mine sentence 
][ . Maybe, i'm going to see the doctor after 2 hours  ][
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حوراء الحصن
28-08-2007, 01:37 PM
Yeah .. uR The teaCheR
 
:: Well .. It Is 
 
?.. Could you tell me when the next bus leaves
 
 
 
 
. he has been at his computer for six hours
 
I hope that's Correct
 
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yes my brother correct:thumbup1:
حوراء الحصن
28-08-2007, 01:41 PM
mine sentence 
][ . Maybe, i'm going to see the doctor after 2 hours  ][
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 Maybe, i'm going to see a doctor after 2 hours ][
it is correct?
my sentence:
What are you do?
1mistake
نظرعيني
29-08-2007, 03:07 PM
What are you do
what did you do?
I still rememmber the day when I met her
GENTLe MAN
30-08-2007, 02:59 AM
Maybe, i'm going to see a doctor after 2 hours 
 
it is correct?
 
 
my sentence:
 
 
What are you do?
1mistake 
 
Not correct 
 
It Is :: Maybe, i'll go to see a doctor after 2 hours
 
(that because i'm not sure if i'll go or not "Maybe) 
 
(i'm going means i'm sure that i'll go)
 
i hope that was easy to understand
 
 
What are you do?
 
? What are you doing
 
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GENTLe MAN
30-08-2007, 03:12 AM
what did you do?
 
 
I still rememmber the day when I met her
 
Spelling mistake 
 
I still remember the day when I met her
 
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I only have 5 minutes before it starts , i should'nt late
أبو خليل
23-10-2007, 11:01 AM
I only have 5 minutes before it starts , i should'nt late
Iam not that much good in grammer but i will try
I have only 5 minutes before it strat, i souldn't late
.My sentence is : Yesterday I visit my grandfather. he was very happy
two mistake please
حوراء الحصن
23-10-2007, 11:11 AM
Iam not that much good in grammer but i will try
I have only 5 minutes before it strat, i souldn't late
.My sentence is : Yesterday I visit my grandfather. he was very happy
two mistake please
تصحيح الجمله:
My sentence is : Yesterday I visited my grandfather. he was very happy
correct my brother?:) 
?my sentence:Is he play football
one mistake only
أبو خليل
23-10-2007, 11:20 AM
تصحيح الجمله:
 
My sentence is : Yesterday I visited my grandfather. he was very happy
 
correct my brother?:) 
 
 
 
?my sentence:Is he play football
 
one mistake only
 
true but u forget the capital letter in the start the second sentence he sould be He 
 
your sentence i think
 
Is he paly a football?
 
my sentence is : How age are you ?
 
one mistake only
فواكة
23-10-2007, 11:45 PM
How age are you 
 
How old are you?
 
My sentence is : she is in that setting rom
two mistake