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GENTLe MAN
25-08-2007, 12:16 PM
السَلام عَليكُم

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[ LaD!eS / GeNTLe MeN ] .. !

It !s A Game

In Th!s Game I wanna Every one Try 2 Be A Corrector

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نرجع للحظه للعربيه [ BREAK ] .. خخ

اللعبه سهله أرجو من الجميع التفـآعل [ منها نستفيد

ومنها نستمتع ] ..!

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فقط انا رآح أقوم بوضع :: جمله إنجليزيه فيها خطء مُتعمد ::

وإلي يجي بعدي يورينا شطارته ويحاول يكتشف الخطء

ويصلح الجمله وبعدها هو بدوره يضع جمله للي بعده يوجد بها أغلاط ..!

أو ممكن يعمل تمويه [ ويخلي جمله صحيحه

والذكي الي بعده يجي ويقول أنه الجمله ما فيها أغلاط ] ..!

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أتمنى إنها وضحت

وانا راح أبتدي بشيء بسيط إن شاء الله

( I Like She But She Don't Like Me ) يلا إكتشف الأغلاط 2

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نظرعيني
25-08-2007, 12:39 PM
I Like She But She Don't Like Me

I like her but she dosent like me


He is good man but him sister are bad

GENTLe MAN
25-08-2007, 01:09 PM
That'S Correct


He is good man but him sister are bad


( He Is a Good Man But His Sister Is Bad ) .. !

][3][ Mistakes ][

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][ She walk under the sun every day ][

نظرعيني
25-08-2007, 10:50 PM
Correct

She walk under the sun every day

.She walks under the sun every day

نظرعيني
25-08-2007, 10:55 PM
sami is adoctor .he have black hair

4
Mistakes

GENTLe MAN
26-08-2007, 12:50 AM
Correct


sami is adoctor .he have black hair


.sami is a doctor , he has black hair




][ Would you mind drink some tea ][

( Mistakes 2 )

حوراء الحصن
26-08-2007, 09:16 AM
][ Would you mind drink some tea


correct


جملتي هي:Has your course started already?

1mistake

GENTLe MAN
27-08-2007, 01:13 AM
][ Would you mind drink some tea


correct





!..[ sorry .. [ It is not correct

The correct answer is

( ?..Would you mind drinking some tea )


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GENTLe MAN
27-08-2007, 01:24 AM
Has your course started already?

1mistake



I thinK the answer is

( ? .. Has your course already started )

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mine sentence

][ ?.. Could you tell me when is the next bus leave ][

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حوراء الحصن
28-08-2007, 11:05 AM
( ? .. Has your course already started )

The correct sentence:

Has your course started yet?

no already

:)



?.. Could you tell me when the bus next leave

correct?:)

حوراء الحصن
28-08-2007, 11:49 AM
جملتي هي:he has been at his computer since six hours

1mistake

GENTLe MAN
28-08-2007, 01:21 PM
( ? .. Has your course already started )

The correct sentence:

Has your course started yet?

no already

:)

Yeah .. uR The teaCheR



?.. Could you tell me when the bus next leave

correct?:)

:: Well .. It Is

?.. Could you tell me when the next bus leaves




he has been at his computer since six hours


. he has been at his computer for six hours

I hope that's Correct

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GENTLe MAN
28-08-2007, 01:30 PM
mine sentence

][ . Maybe, i'm going to see the doctor after 2 hours ][

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حوراء الحصن
28-08-2007, 01:37 PM
Yeah .. uR The teaCheR




:: Well .. It Is

?.. Could you tell me when the next bus leaves





. he has been at his computer for six hours

I hope that's Correct

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yes my brother correct:thumbup1:

حوراء الحصن
28-08-2007, 01:41 PM
mine sentence

][ . Maybe, i'm going to see the doctor after 2 hours ][

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Maybe, i'm going to see a doctor after 2 hours ][

it is correct?


my sentence:


What are you do?
1mistake

نظرعيني
29-08-2007, 03:07 PM
What are you do


what did you do?


I still rememmber the day when I met her

GENTLe MAN
30-08-2007, 02:59 AM
Maybe, i'm going to see a doctor after 2 hours

it is correct?


my sentence:


What are you do?
1mistake


Not correct

It Is :: Maybe, i'll go to see a doctor after 2 hours

(that because i'm not sure if i'll go or not "Maybe)

(i'm going means i'm sure that i'll go)

i hope that was easy to understand


What are you do?

? What are you doing

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GENTLe MAN
30-08-2007, 03:12 AM
what did you do?


I still rememmber the day when I met her

Spelling mistake

I still remember the day when I met her

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I only have 5 minutes before it starts , i should'nt late

أبو خليل
23-10-2007, 11:01 AM
I only have 5 minutes before it starts , i should'nt late


Iam not that much good in grammer but i will try

I have only 5 minutes before it strat, i souldn't late

.My sentence is : Yesterday I visit my grandfather. he was very happy

two mistake please

حوراء الحصن
23-10-2007, 11:11 AM
Iam not that much good in grammer but i will try

I have only 5 minutes before it strat, i souldn't late

.My sentence is : Yesterday I visit my grandfather. he was very happy

two mistake please

تصحيح الجمله:

My sentence is : Yesterday I visited my grandfather. he was very happy

correct my brother?:)



?my sentence:Is he play football

one mistake only

أبو خليل
23-10-2007, 11:20 AM
تصحيح الجمله:

My sentence is : Yesterday I visited my grandfather. he was very happy

correct my brother?:)



?my sentence:Is he play football

one mistake only

true but u forget the capital letter in the start the second sentence he sould be He

your sentence i think

Is he paly a football?

my sentence is : How age are you ?

one mistake only

فواكة
23-10-2007, 11:45 PM
How age are you

How old are you?

My sentence is : she is in that setting rom
two mistake